csc出国留学总结导师评语怎么写

csc出国留学总结导师评语怎么写

出国是件很辛苦的事情，前后忙活了得半年，如果加上之前准备英语考试的时间，那就更长了。这份申请总结，是对自己申请过程的一个回顾，一来希望借此机会让自己能够好好反思申请中存在的问题，二来也希望给其他学弟学妹提供参考和借鉴。申请过程中，得到了很多师长、同学的帮助，也从论坛中获得了很多信息，希望能借此回馈论坛。
1. 个人背景
本科：一所普通985高校；硕士：北京一所知名文科大学。专业：农业经济管理
可能大家都应该知道我所在的两所大学是哪个了。
英语：IELTS（听力7.5，口语6.5，阅读9.0，写作7.5，总分7.5）
GRE：159+166+4.0
GPA：本科：3.76/4.00，硕士3.84/4.00
有几篇中文核心期刊论文，参加过老师的自科社科项目，也有参加写国际会议，没有英文论文。推荐信都是国内老师写的。
2. 申请学校及录取情况
具体的项目名称可能稍有出入，但是不会差太多。我申请的学校，范围很宽，差距很大，全部是博士项目。下面是相关项目的一些信息，有些信息是来自于师兄师姐的介绍，也是一己之见，可能有不准确之处，只是作为参考，也是为抛砖引玉，希望大家都来发表意见。
UIUC（Geography）offer
系里分人文地理、GIS、自然地理三个方向，人文地理老师不少，质性和定量都有做的，涉及领域也很广泛。UIUC地理系在NRC排名上列全美第四，是个不错的地理系，人文地理方面，环境政策做得很好。
U of Toronto (Forestry) offer
林业系里面只有两个老师在做social science的，一个是林业经济，一个是林业治理（偏社会学和政治学），招生也很少，所以申请之前，需要问老师招不招生。
U of Michigan (Natural Resource Management) rejection
北美四大资源环境学院之一。这个系非常杂，做什么的都有，但是招生竞争非常激烈。2014年，96人申请，录了6个人，录取的人都是全奖。博士项目里面，社科方向只招收2个人左右，竞争激烈，建议申请之前套磁以下。和该院教授交流，教授说如果自己有资金资助，会增加录取概率，录取对GRETOEFLGPA成绩还是很看重的，当然研究方向的契合是最重要的。
U of Florida (Agricultural Economics; Interdisciplinary Ecology) offer
农经项目，要求学过中级宏微观计量课程，但实际上没有太严格靠这个卡人。我硕士期间没有学过中高级宏微观，但是也录取了。听一个师姐说，现在北美农经博士就业形势严峻，Florida的2014届农经PhD就业状况也不好。据说他家的资格考试不是特别严格，通过率比较高。
U of California Davis (Agricultural and Resource Economics) rejection
老牌农经强校，但是似乎这几年老人退休，新人上马，处于变动更新期。竞争激烈，200多人申请，最后发了30个offer，去了20多个，最后资格考试可能还要刷掉一部分人。Davis的录取也很奇怪，申请结束一个月之后，先发一批拒信，大约拒掉100多，之后开始发offer，最后4月份再给其他人发拒信。
U of Georgia (Housing and Consumer Economics) AD
这个项目纯属试试，自己也没太放心上，因为本科做过类似课题，所以就申了，后来才知道这个项目还是不错的。佐治亚的这个项目之前在商学院，后来独立出来，金融房产消费，就业前景好。知道的人不多，竞争不激烈。3月初就出结果了，但主要问题是，没钱。今年这个项目硕士博士招了十几个人，所有人都没有奖学金。学校在亚特兰大，一年学费生活费20—30万，如果资金不是问题，可以好好考虑下。
U of Connecticut (Agricultural and Resource Economics) AD 转硕士项目
康涅狄格农经系小而精，资源环境做的不错，但是也面临人员新旧交替。我申请的是博士，但是被转成了硕士，可能是因为课程不够的缘故（我没有学过中级宏微观经济学）。据说这个项目finding也不是特别足。
U of Texas A&M (Agricultural Economics) rejection
我被这个项目拒绝之后，发信询问原因。负责人告诉我，因为我选了“必须要奖学金”，如果没钱我也能来，它就给我发录取。所以，看来“是否必须要奖学金”这个选项，对于录取还是有影响的，需要谨慎选择。但是看论坛上有人是收到了带奖录取的，不太清楚里面的奖学金发放机制。德州学校单独使用一个录取系统，操作非常复杂，如果申请德州的学校，务必提早申请，摸清系统的使用规则。
U of Kentucky (Agricultural Economics) offer
录取截止日期很晚，结果发放的非常晚，它家农经也还行，可以作为保底的学校。
U of Guelph (Agricultural and Resource Economics) rejection
学校排名一般，但据说这个项目是加拿大最好的农经博士项目。据说博士招生人数很小，所以竞争非常激烈。他们家有硕士项目，而且是有奖学金的，可以考虑申请硕士项目，作为博士申请跳板。之前在论坛里看到过被他家硕士项目录取的孩子。另外，Guelph和留基委公派项目有合作协议，如果走公派项目，会容易很多。
3. 选校，选择项目
选校真的非常重要，我觉得应该多花时间在选校上。关于选校，很多帖子都提供了很好的建议。毫无疑问，match是最重要的，如果能够发现一个项目，它仿佛是为自己量身定做一般，那么录取的可能性就很大了。另外，现在经济学类的申请真是太激烈了，对于自身条件不是特别好的同学，还是不要把目标放得太高。大家都蜂拥而至的项目，还是尽量避开。其实，国外有很多好的项目，但是大家选校的时候，往往都是跟大流，别人选什么，我也选什么，造成中国人扎堆。大家不妨把心仪学校所有的Program的列表都看下，如果有一个项目里面，有和自己研究方向类似的老师，那么就可以考虑申请。之后，可以在网上搜下这个项目的名字，如果发现，其他人申请的比较少，那么这可能就蕴含着机会。最后，其实经济管理类，可以跨申的项目非常多，比如我硕士是林经的，不仅可以申农经项目，也可以申资源环境、生态学类项目，还可以申林学院里的项目，还可以申环境社会学等等。我觉得没有必要把眼光限制在经济学院里面，虽然经济学院里对经济学的训练，肯定要远远好于其他学院，但是经济学院申请太激烈，如果其他学院有不错的导师，也可以考虑。
当然，别人都不申的项目，或许是好东西大家不知道，或者是它本身就不是特别好，所以大家都不去申。所以，大家还是得多花时间，把项目里课程开设情况、排名、师资力量、学校名声等等都好好看下，这样一来，找到性价比很高的项目还是不难的。
4. 材料准备
关于材料准备，网上帖子也非常之多，我也就不细说了。我只想提一点，to say is easy, but to do is another. 一定要早点着手开始写材料！！比如，PS，要早写，一旦有灵感，就先记录下来。可以要来学长学姐的文书看看，先照葫芦画瓢，之后再一点一点改，改完之后就能发现早已是面目全非，脱胎换骨了。文书绝对不是一蹴而就的，一定要趁早开始做！
关于文书修改的问题，我个人觉得，文书修改还是有必要的。但是，只要改语言就好，结构和内容方面，文书机构真的很难提出多么有用的建议。文书，关键还是自己用心写，不断完善。另外，文书修改，不一定非找专业公司，自己的师兄师姐、一起申请的同学也能提供很多好的建议。
5. 一点感想
5.1 什么最重要
我之前一直觉得，什么在申请中最重要？现在想想看，是connection！我的建议是，不管是什么项目，申请之前，最好能够找到项目里面的老师，问问某个方向招生否，选拔标准是什么。其实，套磁的目的，也是为了实现这个目的。但是，坦率的说，一般的套磁，实在是精力花费大，而且成功率低。相比之下，直接找关系，是个更加简单的做法。那么，如何发现connection呢？
第一是多参加学术会议，多和大牛打个照面，其实很管用的，大牛都是平易近人的。一旦看对上眼，就可能有意想不到的机会。第二是深入发掘周围人的资源，比如学长学姐出国都去哪里了？学院的导师曾经去哪些学校当过访问学者，或者拿过学位，或者和国外学校有学术合作？从我的经验看，师长对于愿意出国读博的学生，都是非常关照的，也愿意给与帮助。他们完全可以帮忙问下，国外院系的某个导师，招不招生，或者给你引荐一下。
其次，就是个人水平。自身能力的重要性，无需多言，但其实很多时候大家并没有对此给予足够重视。我觉得GRE、TOEFL/IELTS、GPA肯定是越高越好，文章越多越好，课程越高级分数越高越好。条件不好，即便导师努力推荐，对方也可能不愿意要。
最后，就是课程。我在课程方面，吃了很多亏。我的教训是，真的要学习好数学和经济学课程。我所在的学院，连硕士都是不开高级宏微观计量的，更别提数学课了，这在申请时简直是致命的。如果学院不开，自己就要去选修，一定要在课程上，符合对方学院的要求。否则很容易让对方觉得，你没有完善的知识体系和研究能力。我申请康涅狄格，之所以被从博士转为硕士，主要就是课程不足的原因。
6. 关于CSC（国家公派）
我还想提提公派的事情，现在大家对于公派也重视起来，我在这方面，还是有一些心得，在此和大家分享下。
走CSC，需要有两步。首先按照正常程序申请国外学校（也就是说，你必须符合国外学校的申请要求，参加托福雅思GRE考试等），在拿到国外学校录取（一般都是免学费或者提供学费的半奖offer）之后，再向留学基金委CSC申请公派奖学金（即生活费）。这里要明确，公派的话国家是只提供生活费的，亦即，对方学校必须同意提供学费，或者免除学费。留学基金委只对极少数量的申请者提供学费。事实上，公派每年也给极少人提供学费，但这需要单独进行面试，而且录取率比不申请学费的低很多，所以还是不要轻易尝试得好。具体规定，请登录留学基金委网站，详细了解，里面的规定还是非常复杂的。公派，原则上是要求回国服务的，一心想移民的，可能不是很合适走公派。
按这几年的情况看，拿着美国学校的录取，走公派的比例是最高的，这主要是因为美国学校多，好学校更多。但这里头有个问题，大家容易忽视：北美学校的学费普遍较高，而生活费远低于学费；欧洲则是生活费比较高，学费没有那么高；而公派，国家提供的是生活费。因此，从学校的角度上看，欧洲学校要比美国学校更喜欢要公派来的中国学生。公派对美国学校，吸引力有限，因为替他省不了太多钱。所以，不要以为拿着美国学校offer申请公派的人多，就觉得要走公派，申美国比欧洲容易。
如果确实想走公派，一种办法是，申请时不告诉对方自己想走公派，如果对方录取了，并且给了免除学费或者是覆盖学费的奖学金，但是没有提供学费，那么自己再申请公派。第二种办法是，申请的时就直接告诉对方自己想走公派，国家可以提供生活费，这样对方学校可能觉得它只需要提供学费就行，因而更愿意录取你（只是可能）。
如果你申请的是欧洲学校，那么只需要让对方导师按照留学基金委出录取信就可以了。据我所知，欧洲很多学校是有个大老板，大老板负责下面所有博士，博士实际不是一般学生，而是employer，录取信也是由大老板出，这样只要搞定大老板就好了。但是，美国学校比较麻烦，美国学校的博士录取是非常标准化的，需要committee和研究生院的审批，而不是只由导师决定的，对于文科、社科类专业更是如此。这就造成一个问题，美国学校，可能不会完全依照留学基金委的要求出具录取信，而且，它们很难做出妥协。比如：学校出具的录取信，可能是这么写的：
“如果你能拿到公派录取，我们可能/通常会会免除学费。”
但是，这实际不符合留学基金委的要求，“可能/通常会”类似的字眼，很容易给人一种感觉：即便学生拿到公派，学校也不一定负责学费。
那么，学校为什么要出具这样一个邀请函呢？我的理解是，这样可以降低学校，万一因为某种特殊原因无法提供学费，而可能肩负的法律责任。加了“可能/通常会”，即便未来因为资金紧张，学校无法给你提供学费了，那么它也不会承担法律责任，因为它已经在录取信中为自己留有了余地。但是，这实际上是将风险转嫁给了留学基金委和学生。小木虫上，就曾看到过有学生控诉，美国学校只免了博士第一年的学费，第二年不负责学费了，结果学生不知该怎么办。
我的建议是，在申请美国学校的时候，没有必要提前告诉人家，自己要走公派。在和老师套磁时，可以先看看老师的态度，如果老师想要你，那么他可能会给你提供全奖，如果他想要你，但是funding不够，那么他一般会直接告诉你原因，这时你再告诉他，你可以申请公派，学校无需负担生活费。
最后，我觉得，其实公派并不会给你申请北美名校带来特别多的优势。因为名校注重的是学生质量，它不会因为有CSC提供生活费，自己可以少出点钱，而录取一个不合适的学生，而且对于北美名校来说，学费要远比生活费高多了，CSC诱惑很小。但是对于申请欧洲学校来说，公派还是能够让对方更感兴趣的。另外，一些学校是与CSC有合作项目的，比如UCLA, USC, UT, UBC等名校。走合作项目，可能会增加申请成功的几率，但要被录取，还是要符合对方学校要求，而这些要求也是不低的。
最最后，如果大家想了解公派，请去小木虫论坛，里面的公派留学版块是公派申请者的大本营。另外，现在公派申请难度是一年比一年大，申请公派的过程也是相当繁琐，中间需要注意的事情也很多，大家都要有心理准备。毕竟，国家的钱也不是那么好拿的。
7. 关于IELTS和TOEFL
关于雅思和托福，大家都知道，现在二者适用性差异已经很小了，即大多数北美学校都认可雅思，而多数欧洲澳洲学校也认可托福，但是，我还是诚恳的告诉大家，如果真的决定以北美为主，还是坚定的考TOEFL吧，不要考雅思。
北美对于IETLS的歧视是非常明显的，比如Connell的农经根本就不认可雅思，多高都没用。还有一些学校，比如俄亥俄州立，很多项目托福只要100，而雅思要求8，这几乎是告诉你，死了心去考托福吧。还有加拿大的多伦多大学，雅思总分7，单科6.5 但是托福才93，很明显，考托福也是有优势的。因此，如果去北美，坚定考托福吧。
最后，申请还是很不容易的，大家都要有心理准备，希望大家能坚持下去。我其实条件不是很好，中间也遇到过很多打击，有时候都准备二战。和我一起申请的同学，有的非常优秀，但是因为各种原因，结果也不是很好。但是，人生是个马拉松，中间的波折，在日后回头看去，都不算什么。希望大家都有信心，都能坚持。和我一起申请的那个同学，准备今年继续申请，也祝她能成功，祝大家都一路顺利！

出国留学的导师推荐信范文3篇

导师的推荐信在 出国 留学 的过程中有着重要的作用，那你知道出国留学的导师推荐信该怎么写吗?下面是我整理的出国留学的导师推荐信 范文，以供大家阅读。
出国留学的导师推荐信范文(一)
Dear Sir/Madam:
I am writing this letter of recommendation for Mr.Caleb，my former student. I have known Mr. Caleb for more than 6 years since his freshman year at "University of Minnesota". At that time，he took the course-- "Mathematical Analysis，" which I taught mainly for junior students majoring in Mathematics.
To my surprise，I found he was among the few students in his class who could keep up with the pace of my lectures. Moreover，he often posed thought-provoking questions during the course. Thus it was natural that I liked discussing with this young man and became familiar with him. The more I knew him，the more I found he was talented at mathematics. As you can see，he got excellent scores on the course.
In fact，he ranked No. 1 on this 270 hours course in the talented student class which has 34 intelligent others. With his outstanding talent and solid mathematical background，he also did quite well in most other courses during his undergraduate study. By the way，you may wonder why his undergraduate scores look not so good compared to other Chinese applicants. It is easy to explain，because he belonged to the talented student class，which were required to endure harder test papers and stricter grading than most other college students did at least at "University of Minnesota". He even served as Prof. Linda s Research Assistant for one year. No one could deny his commitment to his job.
As a matter of fact，Prof. Linda s electronic lab happened to be neighboring my office and I could always see him working in the lab，either repairing the instruments or helping Prof. Linda collect lab reports. Maybe one more example will demonstrate his commitment more clearly. once he suggested compiling a FORTRAN program to solve a complicated circuit problem in his class. In order to do that，he had to do a lot of computer work. However，because there were few computers available in our computer lab，he had to wake up at 5 a.m. in winter (please note: "Twin city" is a downtown near the north border of China，so it is pretty cold in winter and the heating system is not working very well.) to ensure the 1st position of the long waiting line for his classmates and himself! At last he and his classmates finished the program successfully with his great efforts.
As to his personality，I would like to say Mr. Caleb is a warm-hearted，honest and upright student. He was always ready to help others. During my lectures，many students got confused at some points and I could always see Mr. Caleb help them explain during breaks. In the meanwhile，I must admit that Mr. Caleb was a bit impatient sometimes.
Finally，I would like to conclude my recommendation as follows: frankly，Mr. Caleb is not a genius，but I promise his great intelligence，commitment to work and his kind nature will impress you deeply. Thus I recommend him without reservation for his admission and financial aid to your program. Please feel free to contact me if needed.
Sincerely Yours，
xuexila
出国留学的导师推荐信范文(二)
Dear Colleagues：
As a teacher in Department of Biology, Nankai University, a leading university in China, I am very pleased to take this opportunity to recommend one of my favorite students to your PhD program.
In September, 2004, Miss Zhang was my students in General Biology, the first professional course they take in the field. She likes it very much. I teach her in an open and interactive manner, she is active and passionate about answering class questions. Miss Zhang is bright, energetic and enthusiastic girl who loves speaking out her own ideas. She never escapes from those points of which she is skeptical. Apart from that, she often puts forward her ideas upon questions and exchanges all of her innovate ideas with me after class.
Upon ending of General Biology course, I asked my students to write an essay upon their understanding of biology. I discovered Miss Zhang’s essay was so impressive and persuasive; her careful essay comes from dozens of references to Biology literatures. In essay Miss Zhang stretched out her creative thinking upon status quo of biological research and branches in the field of biology. All of this speaks to her creative and logical and scientific thinking capability. I am gladly to say that Miss Zhang has a clear understanding about General Biology, that comprehension has been reflected fully in her essay. Therefore Miss Zhang got a full point for her essay in her class, and other students took it as model essay for granted.
I believe Miss Zhang’s industriousness, passion and dedication will make her an ideal candidate you are seeking for your program, so I highly recommend her without any hesitation to you. And I will greatly appreciate it if you could accept her into your program.
Sincerely yours,
Prof. ×××
出国留学的导师推荐信范文(三)
In capacity as Professor of Mathematics at Fudan University,I'm writing to recommend Mr. Wang Gesintosyour PhD program in Computer Science. I have known Mr. Wang since his sophomore year of college?and have acted as his thesis advisor and mentor. In my experience he is a gifted and diligent student and an admirably hard worker.
Wang is an impressive student because he has been forced to overcome the significant challenge of a serious illness during his freshman year. When I first met Wang in my Discrete Math class he did not appear to be anything special to me. While his exam scores were good?they were not as high as I would now expect of him. What I didn't know then was that due to his illness Wang was attempting to take all of the difficult early mathematics courses at one time?including Discrete Mathematics Advanced Mathematics Linear Algebra and Possibilities. While most students found preparing for just one set of these exams difficult Wang was overwhelmed by four of them. But in the end he achieved an impressive score on the final exam which made me conscious of his unusual determination he demonstrates when confronting difficult challenges.
Mr. Wang and I have often talked about a variety of mathematics and computer science concepts and problems. During these discussions I always found him to be delightfully intelligent. Not only does he quickly understand the concepts and problems presented to him he is able to analyze these problems and present solutions. But perhaps most important is that Wang's thinking is intensely rigorous. When looking at any question he carefully scrutinizes it and if he finds any uncertain issues he clears them up immediately. I believe this kind of thought is essential to become an excellent computer programmer.
Serving as his thesis advisor?I had a first-hand opportunity to observe the way in which Wang's mind works. In his senor thesis Mr. Wang mainly discussed two challenging questions in regards to″ANN″. In our books in China knowledge of ANN and its uses are very rare. Few people in China have studied this topic and consequently the materials that are available on ANN are limited. Working on this difficult project not only did Mr. Wang rise to the challenge but he went above and beyond the call of duty to analyze his secondary sources and test them for accuracy in practice. In this way?he found mistakes in the book that we use. His diligence and hard work made me extremely proud of him.
Mr. Wang is an intelligent motivated and industrious individual. Teaching and advising him has been a delightful pleasure. I know that if given the chance to study abroad in America he will arm himself to become a great programmer he dreams of being. He has the intelligence and background to achieve these goals – now all he needs is the opportunity. I ask that you look upon his application favorably and grant him a chance to study in your university.

出国留学英文导师推荐信怎么写

1.寻找合适的推荐人
一般留学申请时的推荐信需要2-3封，也就是要找2-3个推荐人。普遍的做法是老师写好内容，然后你自己去翻译成英语，也可以自己写好找老师签字，只要你的老师认可这种做法就行。不管你用哪种方法，首先要找一个好的推荐人。推荐人必须要非常熟悉申请者，能从比较全面的角度了解申请者。
不要一味追求推荐人职位的高低，首要考虑熟悉度。录取委员会需要的推荐人应该是与申请者有过密切交集的，对被推荐人的学术水平和个人能力有十分了解。因此在一个熟悉你的任课老师和一个不熟悉的校长之间选择，要选任课老师。
同时避免选择同一类型的推荐人，要从不同的方面来展示自己的优势和长处。因此如果是在校生，可以找2个学术的推荐人和一个实习的推荐人。
2.密切沟通
确定了推荐人就要开始和推荐人进行深入的沟通，出国留学的学生会比较多，推荐人可能要同时给多个学生写推荐信，因此要尽早联系推荐人。尽量和推荐人面谈，谈谈自己的成绩，申校专业，未来的规划发展。让推荐人对自己和申请的专业有进一步的了解。面谈的时候记得带上自己的简历和个人陈述。一方面让推荐人更加的了解自己，另外一方面也让推荐人在写推荐信的时候更加有针对性。
3.推荐信内容
一般来说，申请者是不能看到推荐信内容的。但是在和推荐人详谈时可以先交代下所申请的学校注重什么样的特质。通篇都是溢美之词而没有实例佐证的推荐信也不是录取委员希望看到的，所以推荐信的内容一定要和自己写的个人陈述、简历细节一致。
推荐信主要由以下几项构成：
推荐人和申请者的关系，是任课教授？还是实习的mentor？
熟悉程度：比如任课的教授教过2-3门课，而且是课程论文的指导老师。
申请者的优势和长处；优秀的学术成绩和研究能力；工作中的杰出表现；特殊才能，比如艺术、体育、技艺等。这些特质都需要有实例的支撑，列举一些具体数据和细节，能让录取委员会从实例中看到申请人的优秀的特质。也可以采用适当的对比，通过同平级的人相比，来突出申请者的优势。
注意事项：
①推荐信最好是控制在一页之内，做到言简意赅，有理有据。
②推荐信最后打印在学校/公司的抬头纸，需要推荐人亲手签名。
③注意提醒推荐人推荐信提交的链接是有有效期的。
④避免亲属或家庭成员作为推荐人。如果实在家族企业实习，如果一定要请亲属推荐，在写推荐信的时候一定不要表明血缘关系。

出国留学信找谁写

推荐信是留学申请必须提交的重要资料之一。那么，留学推荐信该找谁来写?下面是我整理的关于出国留学推荐信的相关内容，欢迎阅读参考。

如何选择推荐人

三个推荐人，一般是选择两个学校老师当推荐人，第三个选择实习单位上司当推荐人。

至于学校老师推荐信，建议一个选择与所申请专业相关或相近的专业课老师，借他来向招生官展示你的学术学习与研究所需的能力，比如，申请金融专业，如果你是金融专业学生，那么自然可以选择金融专业课老师之一;如果你是非金融商科专业学生，那么可以选择相关的商科专业课，比如宏微观经济学;或者是其他非商科专业，那么尽量选能够体现你数理分析能力的课程，这是要学好金融所必须的特质;当然，如果没有，你可以选择你的本科专业课老师之一，通过实例讲解，体现你的学习能力、分析能力之类的。

另外一个选择可以选择像班主任、系主任、辅导员这类老师。

因为他们是与你有接触的前提条件下，又是对你整体情况比较了解的人。

通过他们的推荐信，来向学校展示你的不同于学习方面的.能力。

比如，如果你申请传媒专业，可以通过课外活动的事例，来体现你的团队沟通能力、交际能力等等之类的。

而实习单位上司，我们也一般建议，也是美国学校有时会提到的直属上司。

这个要求，其实很好理解的。

因为你，只有走直属上司，才是更加了解你的工作内容、工作状态、工作表现的。

因此，他才更有发言权来说你的能力特点，并且，能够对这些特点的相关事例，如数家珍。

不然，推荐信的说服力就不足了。

出国留学导师推荐信一

Dear AdmissionsCommittee,

As Director ofthe State Key Laboratory of Electrical Insulation at ABC University in

BLANK, China, itis my sincere and distinct pleasure to recommend Ms.

Xiao Xiao for yourgraduate program in BLANK.

I have known Ms.Xiao since 2001, when she was one of eighty students who completed theirundergraduate thesis projects in my BLANK laboratory.

Ms.Juan’s enthusiasm forand diligence in learning helped her become one of the most outstandingstudents in the entire group, making a strong, positive impression upon me.

Ms.Xiao is a very driven woman and student who know what she wants to accomplishand does not falter in her chosen path.

Her intellectual curiosity and desireto acquire new acknowledge continuously have led her to perform much study onher own outside the scope of her classes and research work; oftentimes, Iwitnessed her consulting scientific books and journals to help her discover howshe could improve her knowledge and her work in the laboratory.

Countlesstimes, Ms.Xiao remained in the laboratory for more than twelve hours in a rowto complete her work and make sure there were no errors.

With such devotion andfortitude, Ms.Xiao did not surprise me with her superior performance on herthesis paper.

In terms of her character, Ms.Xiao is an amiable, courteous, andhelpful young woman who has many friends amongst our laboratory personnel.

Ms.Xiao is readyto move on to a more rigorous program of graduate study.

Her academicperformance, research work, and upstanding personal character have won her myhighest recommendation, and I hope you give her application strong consideration.

Thank you.

Sincerely,

NAME

Director

State KeyLaboratory of Electrical Insulation,

ABC University

出国留学导师推荐信二

Dear Sir/Madam:

I am writing thisletter of recommendation for Mr.Caleb, my former student.

I have known Mr.Caleb for more than 6 years since his freshman year at "University ofMinnesota".

At that time, he took the course-- "MathematicalAnalysis," which I taught mainly for junior students majoring inMathematics.

To my surprise, I found he was among the few students in his classwho could keep up with the pace of my lectures.

Moreover, he often posedthought-provoking questions during the course.

Thus it was natural that I likeddiscussing with this young man and became familiar with him.

The more I knewhim, the more I found he was talented at mathematics.

As you can see, he gotexcellent scores on the course.

In fact, he ranked No.1 on this 270 hourscourse in the talented student class which has 34 intelligent others.

With hisoutstanding talent and solid mathematical background, he also did quite well inmost other courses during his undergraduate study.

By the way, youmay wonder why his undergraduate scores look not so good compared to otherChinese applicants.

It is easy to explain, because he belonged to the talentedstudent class, which were required to endure harder test papers and strictergrading than most other college students did at least at "University ofMinnesota".

He even served as Prof.Linda s Research Assistant for oneyear.

No one could deny his commitment to his job.

As a matter of fact, Prof.Linda s electronic lab happened to be neighboring my office and I could alwayssee him working in the lab, either repairing the instruments or helping Prof.Linda collect lab reports.

Maybe one more example will demonstrate hiscommitment more clearly.

once he suggested compiling a FORTRAN program to solvea complicated circuit problem in his class.

In order to do that, he had to do alot of computer work.

However, because there were few computers available inour computer lab, he had to wake up at 5 a.m.in winter (please note:"Twin city" is a downtown near the north border of China, so it is prettycold in winter and the heating system is not working very well.) to ensure the1st position of the long waiting line for his classmates and himself! At lasthe and his classmates finished the program successfully with his great efforts.

As to hispersonality, I would like to say Mr.Caleb is a warm-hearted, honest andupright student.

He was always ready to help others.

During my lectures, manystudents got confused at some points and I could always see Mr.Caleb help themexplain during breaks.

In the meanwhile, I must admit that Mr.Caleb was a bitimpatient sometimes.

Finally, I would like to conclude my recommendation asfollows: frankly, Mr.Caleb is not a genius, but I promise his greatintelligence, commitment to work and his kind nature will impress you deeply.

Thus I recommendhim without reservation for his admission and financial aid to your program.

Please feel free to contact me if needed.

Sincerely Yours,

XXX

导师意见怎么写

一篇范文，希望有帮助。
该生在硕士研究生学习阶段，思想上要求上进，认真学习，努力钻研专业知识，毕业之际，回顾三年来的学习、工作以及生活，做总结如下：
在专业课程的学习上，她根据研究方向的要求，有针对性的认真研读了有关核心课程，打下扎实的科研基础；在读期间她还研修了很多其他课程，开阔了视野，对整个研究领域的结构有了更深刻的认识。在英语学习方面，其具备了较强的英语听、说、读、写能力。
在做硕士论文期间，其积极参与各项教学科研活动，在教学实践的过程中，认真阅读教材和查阅学术资料，大大提升了其教学水平。同时她还具有较强的动手能力，并参与了导师的多项课题，使自己的理论与实践水平得到了很大的提升。
在平时生活中，她为人处世和善、乐于助人，并积极参与各项集体活动。在思想上她始终对自己有较高的要求，主动和党组织靠拢。
其在研究生阶段的科研、学习以及工作都是优秀出色的，相信这些经历和积累都将成为其人生道路上的宝贵财富。希望其在以后的工作和学习中，将继续保持并发扬严谨治学的作风，兢兢业业，争取取得更大的成绩。